Anyone able to critique my work?

[amberzak]

I'm looking for someone with a string writing ability able to give good feedback on a short screenplay that I am writing for entry onto a screenwriting course. It needs to be finished soon though, so it will be quick turnaround.

 

[AMOG]

Key Payton is an excellent script consultant. Google him and you will find his agency listed. No he isn't free, but you don't want free help, well... not if you want to make your script better. He has a very attractive rate for short films and he knows his stuff. Also, he is a believer so he knows his stuff when it comes to faith based films.