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I am a previously published Christian the author looking for a golfer to read and critique a new faith-based golf novel that I've just about finished. I just need an honest evaluation before I go through all the rigors of submitting to an agent or publisher. I will send you just a few chapters at a time so not to overwhelm and I'm not in a rush, so there's no pressure.


I know it's an odd request, but If you are willing (or even if you know someone else who might be) please write me back.



Thank you so much!



G. G. Barton
 

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You have never deserted those who look to You.
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Some trust in chariots.
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Hello all!


I am a previously published Christian the author looking for a golfer to read and critique a new faith-based golf novel that I've just about finished. I just need an honest evaluation before I go through all the rigors of submitting to an agent or publisher. I will send you just a few chapters at a time so not to overwhelm and I'm not in a rush, so there's no pressure.


I know it's an odd request, but If you are willing (or even if you know someone else who might be) please write me back.



Thank you so much!



G. G. Barton
I have published dozens of books, many of which are reprints of older, public domain volumes, and about a dozen of which are my own.
First, use Grammarly to give your writing a more polished and professional look. Publish using the Amazon KDP service. It costs you nothing. Just submit the DOCX or PDF and fill in the blanks. They do not edit or format your work... they just check for plagiarism, so it is important you have a grammar/content checker. Like I said, I use Grammarly in Word 365. I have been doing this for about 10 years and have built up a pretty good monthly royalty check.
 
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Hello all!


I am a previously published Christian the author looking for a golfer to read and critique a new faith-based golf novel that I've just about finished. I just need an honest evaluation before I go through all the rigors of submitting to an agent or publisher. I will send you just a few chapters at a time so not to overwhelm and I'm not in a rush, so there's no pressure.


I know it's an odd request, but If you are willing (or even if you know someone else who might be) please write me back.



Thank you so much!



G. G. Barton
Once again, welcome to CF. If you need help with writing, there is a CF Writer's Guild forum. Also, while AI should not be used to write books in my opinion, AI can be used to brainstorm ideas, if you ever get stuck. If your computer was made in the past few years, it can run a local, private AI pretty well.

This is an example of AI brainstorming ideas. It does well, but it runs slow on my older computer.
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