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Screenplay/Scripts. Difference? (Advice Please)

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Whats the difference between a screenplay and a script?

Im planning to do Film Studies for A-Levels and one of the units is to write a screenplay. What makes up one? How long does it have to be? What is it?

Im really interested in the film industry, my dream is to make a movie. I have just awesome ideas for movies and TV dramas. Its just i dont know where to start...

What advice can you give me?
 

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Whats the difference between a screenplay and a script?

There are many kinds of script, but context usually keeps you from having to specify. If you're talking with film producers, they'll know that you mean a movie script. If you're in a radio drama club, they'll know that you mean a radio script (yes, they still use them.)

A screenplay is any script that can be made into a visual medium, like a movie or a television show.

Im planning to do Film Studies for A-Levels and one of the units is to write a screenplay. What makes up one?

Three acts (usually), headers, sluglines, action, and dialogue.

Currently accepted formatting is constantly changing. Normally, most transitions are no longer used.

In action lines, names are generally capitalized the first time the character appears. After that, they're in lowercase. Every cue, however, is still capitalized.

Sounds are no longer capitalized. Neither are props.

Scenes are not numbered until the shooting script is written.


Here's an example I made up off the top of my head:
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ACT 1​

FADE IN:


INT. GONZO'S STORE -- DAY

GONZO, 40-ish with hippy hair and denim overalls, pulls out a baseball bat and leaps over the counter. He falls on his pratt with a huge crash.

Two YOUNG PUNKS run out the door carrying armloads of snacks.

GONZO
(winces)

I'm getting too old for this!​

CUT TO:​

INT. EMERGENCY ROOM -- DAY

Gonzo grits his teeth as a CANDYSTRIPER places an icepack on his bruised bum.

CANDYSTRIPER

You're getting too old for this, Gonzo!​

FADE OUT:​

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Ok, here we go.


This is a heading. Most TV scripts use them. Movie scripts may or may not.



This is a transition. FADE IN: is still commonly used at the beginning of a script.


INT. GONZO'S STORE -- DAY

This is a Scene Heading, commonly called a Slugline. It establishes that the scene takes place indoors ("INT."), that it is in the set for Gonzo's Store, and that it occurs during daylight hours ("DAY"). Every scene has one.

Outside scenes would start "EXT." Night scenes would end "NIGHT".


GONZO, 40-ish with hippy hair and denim overalls, pulls out a baseball bat and leaps over the counter. He falls on his pratt with a huge crash.

This is action. It shows what's happening in the scene.

Notice that it uses active words ("pulls out", "leaps", "falls") -- always use active words, never passive ones ("is", "seems").

Notice also that it's written in "real time" -- everything is in present tense, as if it's happening right now.

Since this is the first time Gonzo's been shown, his name is capitalized. The prop "baseball bat" and the sound "crash" are not capitalized. Many older scripts still use the old method, but it's fallen out of favor.


Two YOUNG PUNKS run out the door carrying armloads of snacks.

More action. The Young Punks need to be capitalized because this is their first mention. If they were more important to the story, they'd have more description, and maybe even a line or two.



This is a cue. They are always capitalized. It simply shows who's about to speak.


(winces)​

This is a parenthetical, more commonly called a wrylie. Don't overuse them; let the actors act.

I'm getting too old for this!​

This is dialogue.


CUT TO:​

Another transition. You'll see a lot of CUT TO: and FADE TO: ( and even stranger ones like POP FLASH TO: ) in scripts. You can use them, but they're falling out of style.


INT. EMERGENCY ROOM -- DAY

The slugline for the next scene. It takes place inside the E.R. during the day.


Gonzo grits his teeth as a CANDYSTRIPER places an icepack on his bruised bum.

The action for the scene. Since Gonzo has already been introduced, his name isn't capitalized. The new character, Candystriper, is capitalized.


CANDYSTRIPER​

Another cue. Always capitalized.


You're getting too old for this, Gonzo!​

More dialogue.


FADE OUT:​

FADE OUT: is generally still used at the end of an act. FADE TO BLACK: is still used at the end of a script. They are, of course, transitions.


What you did NOT see:

1. INT. GONZO'S STORE -- DAY

Scene numbers. They're only used in the final script, also called the Production Script or the Shooting Script.


PAN RIGHT. ZOOM on GONZO

Camera instructions. Not your job. You can probably get away with using a couple in a script, but more than that will upset the Director. Let the actors act, and let the director direct. You're the writer, you write.


Gonzo feels sad about his bruised bum.

That's telling, not showing. Always show. Maybe something like:

Gonzo studies his bruised bum in a mirror. A single tear drips from his eye.



IMPORTANT NOTE: Due to the limitations of the board software, the spacing of the various elements in the script snippet are not correct. Each element is supposed to be a certain number of characters from the left edge of the paper. You can find a list of where to set your tabs online.


This should get you started on the basics. There are lots of other elements a script can use, such as different types of montages, telephone conversations, voice overs, match cuts, and captions. You'll learn about them later. Just bear in mind that a voice over (V.O.) is different from an offscreen (O.S.)
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How long does it have to be?

In general, a properly formatted screenplay should average one minute per page. A two-hour movie script would be about 120 pages. A two-hour comedy, however, runs about 90 pages or so. A dialogue-heavy drama may run 130 pages.


Im really interested in the film industry, my dream is to make a movie. I have just awesome ideas for movies and TV dramas. Its just i dont know where to start...

What advice can you give me?

Write.

(I am reallllly interested in seeing how this post looks after I push SUBMIT.)
 
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Thank you for the details and basics! I have long been intrested in writing a movie, it excites me but overwhelms me where to start as well. Is there any free script writing software? Thank you for your time and detail! Have you ever written, sold a script?
 
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Celtx is free screenwriting software ( http://www.celtx.com ). I've used it, and it works well, but I prefer Final Draft (which is not free.)

You can also find free templates for use in MS Word, which should keep your spacing and capitalization correct.
 
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Index cards. Lots and lots of index cards.

Put the general idea for the scene on the top line ( "John says goodbye to Mary at the airport" ), skip a few lines and write your slug ( "INT. AIRPORT LOBBY -- NIGHT" ), then write what happens in the scene. Put in any dialogue you think of.

Don't worry about format or anything, just write what you visualize.

The best part is, with index cards, you can move scenes around and get a really good feel for the sequence before you ever even start on the scriptwriting part.

Get the BIG index cards, they're thinner, yes, but I can't get a good scene on a small card without writing on the back.
 
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White cards with blue lines on them. Most are 4" x 6", but I prefer the 5" x 8" variety. Get a pack of 100 at Wal~Mart for about a dollar.

You'll need more than one pack.


ETA: Ah, but I notice that you're in England. Ye Olde Stationary Shoppe should carry them, though they may be called something different.
 
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