Ok, I havent been here in SUCH A LONG TIME! I realize this haha. I was up last night, feeling inspired. So here's somethin I wrote. What do you all think? Honest constructive criticism???
Yesteryear's Road
walking along in my dream
i wondered an endless rode
after yesterdays end
but before tomorrows glow
i was walking backwards it seemed
to where i had been before
back beyond the sunset
and back just a little more
i saw myself sitting
deep in the woods
with the girl i married
or rather---would
we were younger than
by too many years
she was bright with laughter
and stained with few tears
she told me she loved me
i said it in return
we sat there for hours
not heeding times turn
i then turned around
back into time
into the years
where she was mine
the wedding bells were ringing
the priest said his lines
we were happily-ever after
until the end of time
the wedding night had came
we triumphed lifes weather
i held her through the night
we had planned out lives together
the tears began to appear
as i walked ever on
forward through yesteryear
forward and beyond
she was in my arms again
our children were outside
we watched out the window
at our little boys slide
i turned away then
not able to hide
i went further ahead
not helping but cry
the lights were fading by
to my left and right
the steps are closer now
are closer to my time
i saw a vision
of my one and only love
we were sitting on a bench
reflecting on the above
the moonlight gleamed upon us
as fate sat us alone
we were much older then
our gray had truly shown
the lines on our face
were that of age
her old hand in mine
as we got to our last page
we talked through the night
this i will always remember
the stars were shining
in silver little embers
our kids were grown
our lives all complete
our love still as strong
as strong as could be
she was still as beautiful
as she had ever been
she was, and always will be
my love, my best friend
i turn away
i cant take any more
out last moments together
before God had opened his door
she left in my arms
the way she entered my life
i held her lifeless on that bench
my incredible wife
her funeral was beautiful
i kissed her good-bye
knowing id see her again
dripping her with my cries
all my nights now-
-now are as lonely as ever
i still kiss her goodnight
through a picture we had taken together
i had collected myself
upon that double-edged street
i wipe away my tears
standing incomplete
i look down the road
to where tomorrow leads
praying that when i wake
i will no longer be
Yesteryear's Road
walking along in my dream
i wondered an endless rode
after yesterdays end
but before tomorrows glow
i was walking backwards it seemed
to where i had been before
back beyond the sunset
and back just a little more
i saw myself sitting
deep in the woods
with the girl i married
or rather---would
we were younger than
by too many years
she was bright with laughter
and stained with few tears
she told me she loved me
i said it in return
we sat there for hours
not heeding times turn
i then turned around
back into time
into the years
where she was mine
the wedding bells were ringing
the priest said his lines
we were happily-ever after
until the end of time
the wedding night had came
we triumphed lifes weather
i held her through the night
we had planned out lives together
the tears began to appear
as i walked ever on
forward through yesteryear
forward and beyond
she was in my arms again
our children were outside
we watched out the window
at our little boys slide
i turned away then
not able to hide
i went further ahead
not helping but cry
the lights were fading by
to my left and right
the steps are closer now
are closer to my time
i saw a vision
of my one and only love
we were sitting on a bench
reflecting on the above
the moonlight gleamed upon us
as fate sat us alone
we were much older then
our gray had truly shown
the lines on our face
were that of age
her old hand in mine
as we got to our last page
we talked through the night
this i will always remember
the stars were shining
in silver little embers
our kids were grown
our lives all complete
our love still as strong
as strong as could be
she was still as beautiful
as she had ever been
she was, and always will be
my love, my best friend
i turn away
i cant take any more
out last moments together
before God had opened his door
she left in my arms
the way she entered my life
i held her lifeless on that bench
my incredible wife
her funeral was beautiful
i kissed her good-bye
knowing id see her again
dripping her with my cries
all my nights now-
-now are as lonely as ever
i still kiss her goodnight
through a picture we had taken together
i had collected myself
upon that double-edged street
i wipe away my tears
standing incomplete
i look down the road
to where tomorrow leads
praying that when i wake
i will no longer be