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Ivy
6th January 2006, 05:27 PM
(You've read good poetry; this is nothing like it.);)

"Gen-TILE" rhymes with "vile,"
But it also goes with "gentle"
Gentle is a mantle I mentally prefer
Refer me to the Scriptures
And I shall have no strictures
On eschewing every fricture
And boo-ing my ancest-ures
(a few of them, at leastly)
For behaving truly beastly
Let us firstly have a feastly
Most sweetly and completely
And I hope you'll bring some kugel
The kind with cream and noodle
I'll bring some chocolate trifle--
And my gentle Gentile noodle.

:wave: Love in Yeshua,
Ivy

Tishri1
6th January 2006, 05:57 PM
hey that's cute...is that your poetry?:wave:

Ivy
6th January 2006, 06:02 PM
hey that's cute...is that your poetry?:wave:

I ruefully admit it is. :D

I should have stuck it in the Uncle Hirams' Deli, but hadn't noticed that thread yet.

CovenantRay
7th January 2006, 07:04 PM
(You've read good poetry; this is nothing like it.);)

"Gen-TILE" rhymes with "vile,"
But it also goes with "gentle"
Gentle is a mantle I mentally prefer
Refer me to the Scriptures
And I shall have no strictures
On eschewing every fricture
And boo-ing my ancest-ures
(a few of them, at leastly)
For behaving truly beastly
Let us firstly have a feastly
Most sweetly and completely
And I hope you'll bring some kugel
The kind with cream and noodle
I'll bring some chocolate trifle--
And my gentle Gentile noodle.

:wave: Love in Yeshua,
Ivy

Very Punny -- Reminds me of Ogden Nash.

Thank you for the smile on my face,

CovenantRay :prayer:

Ivy
10th January 2006, 04:50 PM
You're welcome. :cool:

kisstheson
18th January 2006, 02:37 AM
Found it Ives! Very funny :D as usual! This must have been a late night or wee hours of the morn computer blitz go wacko on the forum craze!;)