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RedKnight
9th October 2005, 07:30 PM
Hand by RedKight

Take my hand and hold it tight
Hold it strong and hold it with might
Hold in the day and in the dead of night
Hold it with a heart of truth and right
And with hope that shines throught the night.

Thank you for reading it tell what you think and write some of you own here thanks.

Theresasjourney
10th October 2005, 09:27 PM
I like it very much....;o)
It speaks of great love and trust and faith and hope....with an inocense about it...;o)

californiadreamin
11th October 2005, 01:05 AM
I like it!!!!!
It reminds me of a child holding a parents hand in trust.

spyderchick
11th October 2005, 03:45 PM
Thanks for posting this. I really enjoyed it and I'm glad you shared. I will have to share with you some of my own sometime. :)